The shoes arent right.
Hm?
The shoes, these shoes, she said. Theyre all wrong with this dress.
He glanced over at her. Theyre fine.
It was the first time hed looked up in twenty minutes. She was standing in front of the mirror, her entire collection of shoes scattered in hurricane-aftermath fashion around her feet. He was sitting on the edge of the bed with his book. Like always. Like Sunday-morning-through-Saturday-night, one-break-to-watch-the-six-oclock-news, never-bother-to-find-a-real-jobjust like that. There was a book in his hands when he turned off the light at exactly 11:30 every night and when he woke up at 8:00 the next morning. She swore hed read every book in the house at least six times through.
She kicked off the pair of red heels that shed never really liked in the first place and walked over to his side of the bed, kneeling at his feet and resting her arms across his lap.
You promised to take me out tonight, you know. She had extracted the promise from him late the night before, after the book was laid aside, the lights were turned out, and he was half asleep.
Mm.
She pulled the book out of his hands and laid it face down on the bed. Something by Salinger. Salinger was his favorite, though she never understood why. Dry as dust, that one, and not an ounce of romantic intrigue.
For our anniversary. You didnt forget, did you?
No. His eyes flicked back and forth across her forehead and the tip of her nose, but never managed to settle anywhere in between.
You didnt forget?
No.
Do you love me more than those books of yours?
Of course.
Even Salinger?
He put a stiff hand on top of her head and made an awkward attempt to stroke her hair. Even Salinger.
She smiled ever so slightlyjust enough to make him try to smile in returnand stood up. Walked over to the closet and pushed the piles of shoes behind the door with the side of her foot. Went into the bathroom. Took off her earrings and laid them inside her jewelry case. Took off her dress.
Wrapped in the folds of a silk nightgown, she came back into the bedroom and gently closed the door. She took the book by Salinger from the edge of the bed, still face down, and marked his placepage 117, was it? Yes, of course that was it. She crawled into bed and leaned carefully across to put the book on his nightstand, right next to his alarm clock, which was set for exactly 8:00am. Just where he liked it.
11:30pm. She switched off the light. After a few minutes, when she knew he would be just starting to fall asleep, she rolled over toward his side of the bed.
Its our anniversary tomorrow, you know, she whispered, her lips brushing up against his pillow. Youll take me out somewhere, wont you? Somewhere nice, so I can wear that new dress you bought me? Maybe we could even go dancing, just like we used to. Youll take me, wont you? Promise?
And his pillow, as silent, as cold, as empty as it had been for 17 years, gave a promise just as cold and empty as it had given every night before.














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Is he dead? Is he just really detached and she can get away with that? Does he forget every day's memories? I don't understand..
..but it's awesome.
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Certainly it's open to interpretation, but in my understanding, yes, he is dead - he's been dead for 17 years, but she's been in such a state of denial for so long that she endlessly relives (hallucinates, maybe) the last night he was alive. I agonized over the ending for a long time, because I couldn't figure out what to do with the male character - he's definitely not the most dynamic personality, and was hard to do very much with. So then I thought, "well...but what if he's not even really there?" And thus this ending was born.
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The characters were really well developed, and the dialogue was flawless, really natural. The story itself was...touching, I really enjoyed it. At first I thought he was one of those people with memory loss, but then...yeah...so sad.
I love Salinger too
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Henry David Thoreau.
And I'm curious, what was he reading? Is there a significance to page 117 or is it just where he was at when he died?
I myself haven't read much by Salinger, just Catcher in the Rye, but I've been interested in some of his stories for a while.
I didn't really have any particular book in mind, so page 117 is kind of random to - but yes, I was thinking that's the page he was on when he died. Ironically, Catcher in the Rye is pretty much the only book of Salinger's that I haven't read, though I own it and have been wanting to read it for a long time. I love his books of short stories - Franny and Zooey, Nine Stories, etc. They tend a bit toward the depressive side, and I kind of wish he didn't insist on swearing every other word, but there's just something I love about their honesty.
Thank you so much for the comment!
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